Wednesday, 7 September 2016
My first blog in Oz
This is first time to visit Sydney for me. Everyday is a beautiful day. It's not so cold and people are so kind and friendly .I go to school by a train .I can see a gorgeous view of the Harbour Bridge and the Opera house.I will stay here about 10 weeks. This opportunity will never come again in my life. So I want get a lots of experience not only in English but about the medical system too.In the near future I will see a doctor who is Japanese but he graduated from an Australian medical school. I look forward to meeting him and talking to him.
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This is first time to visit Sydney for me. Everyday is a beautiful day. (It's) not so cold and people (are) so kind and friendly. I go to school by train. I can see a gorgeous view of (the) Harbour Bridge and (the) Opera house.I will stay here about 10 weeks. This opportunity will never come again in my life. So I want get a lots of experience not only (in) English but about (the) medical system too. (In the near) future I will see a doctor who is Japanese but he graduated (from an) Australian medical school. I am look forward to meeting (him) and talk(ing) to him.
ReplyDeleteGood job Koichi. Welcome to the blogging workshop. I have put all the corrections in ( ).
Are you a doctor in Japan? What is your specialty?
How did you set up this meeting with the Japanese doctor?
I hope you're having a good weekend.
Teacher Daniel
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for you correct my first blog. It's very help me to learn English.
Yes,I'm a abdominal surgeon in Japan. I have been work 25 years. When I graduated medical school I want to research or practice in other country . But that dream can't came true. I very like English . Several years ago I learned it in a English conversation school twice a week. But after half year my job was so hard so I can't continued that school. I already gave up about English study. This time I 'll move to another hospital from this December. So suddenly I have three month times. I decide come to Australia and realize my dream. I came to Sydney just one week. I really like this country very much. I homestay in a Australian family. They are very kindly to me.Everyday is beautiful day , fresh air,great nature,and most people is very passional about environment protection, beach is so clear not any garbage etc. I'm 51 years old. Maybe oldest in langports. But I'm so happy because I can come to here to study English. Sometimes I waked up maybe it's not real like a dream . But it's real so I'm really happiness .But I stay here just 10 weeks. I 'll do my best to learn English from you .Because your class is easy to understand and very useful for me. I surfing Japanese doctor in Sydney from internet. I found Dr.torii. So I sent a email to him. And he reply to me and let me to contact him when I arrived Sydney,then he will talk to me about Australian medical information. Thank you for your kindly to me. Have a nice weekend too!
It's so interesting to me to have the opportunity to teach skilled professional people English. I have taught lawyers, plastic surgeons and people from so many different walks of life. Teaching English and learning about the cultures and experiences of my students is an enriching experience for me.
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for correct(ing) my first blog. It's very help(ful to) me to learn English.
Yes,I'm a abdominal surgeon in Japan. I have been work 25 years. When I graduated medical school I want to research or practice in (an)other country . But that dream (didn't come) true. I (really)like English . Several years ago I learned it in a English conversation school twice a week. After (six months) my job was so hard (that I couldn't continue at) that school so I () gave up (my) English stud(ies). This time I 'll move to another hospital from this December. So suddenly I have three month(s) time. I decide(d to) come to Australia and realize my dream. I came to Sydney just one week. I really like this country very much. I (am staying in a) homestay (with an) Australian family. They are very kind() to me. Everyday is (a) beautiful day, fresh air,great nature,and most people is very passiona(te) about environment(al) protection, (the) beach is so clea(n) (with out) any garbage etc. I'm 51 years old, (and I) maybe the oldest (student) in Langports, but I'm so happy because I can come () here to study English. Sometimes I wake() up maybe it's not real like a dream . But it is real so I'm really happ(y) () I (am going to)stay here (for) just 10 weeks. I 'll do my best to learn English from you .Because your class is easy to understand and very useful for me. I (found the) Japanese doctor in Sydney (by surfing the) internet. I found Dr. Torii, so I sent a(n) email to him. He repl(ied) to me and (told) me to contact him when I arrived (in)Sydney, then he will talk to me about Australian medical information. Thank you for your kind(ness) to me. Have a nice weekend too!
Great work Koichi :)